frwrd.edit cuts the words that perform without proving and keeps the claim. Evaluators flag assertions without mechanisms, numbers, or named proof — this pass finds every one before they do, and it never drops a promise you made.
The pass runs on one principle: an evaluator credits what’s checkable. Everything it returns exists to convert what you asserted into what you can show.
Line-anchored edits, not a style memo: the adjective that asserts (“proven, robust approach”) replaced with the fact that proves, or flagged when no fact exists to prove it. Nothing you committed to gets dropped — that’s the rule the pass runs under.
Every claim in the draft, listed with its proof: present, weak, or missing. An unsubstantiated claim reads worse to an evaluator than a modest one — this is the table that finds them all before the buyer does.
Headcounts, dates, dollar figures, and certifications checked across volumes. The technical volume promising day-one staffing that the cost volume’s ramp contradicts — caught here, not in the debrief.
The sentences an evaluator has to read twice, found and fixed. This isn’t taste: research shows hard-to-read prose gets scored lower on substance, not just style. Clear writing is points.
The editorial pass runs late — after Preflight says the coverage is there, usually alongside a board run. It sharpens what you decided to say; it never decides what to say. Voice, strategy, and the commitments themselves stay yours — the pass just makes sure every one of them can survive a skeptical read.
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